MY MOURNFUL SOUL..…
I M Very Sad U Know!
But Why Do I Don’t Have A Foe?
My Heart Has Become A Device,
Who Is Abide To Follow Everyone’s Advice.
Now, it is Idle Like a clock,
Just Passing Over The Hills And The Rock!
It Is A Garden Of Dead Trees...
Where, All Its Happiness Is At Cease.
It Needs A Start U Know,
But Then The Time Says NO!!
But I Still Memorize That Friendship
Which Was Better Than A 1000 Golden-sheep!
Why Do I Still Miss My Friends?
Who Just Moved Away Like Passing Trends!
Why Couldn’t They See?
The Reality, In My Dreams!
And, As I Go On….
My Heart Silently Screams-
Why Do I, Still Care For Them?
Who Played Me As A Game…
My Heart Invokes Into, The Reality,
Thus I Bow, My Head In Guilty.
As They Never Gave Me A Chance To Score
But, I Had To Say Them-Something More.
My Heart Was Once A Soothing Song!!
When My Friends Walked Along….
When They Were By My Side,
I Actually Had no Tears To Hide!!
But Its All Over And I Stand Alone-
Waving My Hand As ‘THEY’ Are Gone………
Now, I Don’t Want Them Back.
I M Happy Walking Alone On My Track.
My Small Heart Is Now Torn
And I Have Paused Here Just To Mourn!!
Common’ I Have Stopped Crying,
And I Do Promise, I’ll Not Stop Trying!!
And Here My Heart Won’t Stop.
And, From My Eyes No Tears Would drop..
And, I Would Continue My Gleaming Song…..
As I Will Walk Along!
To Learn, The Different Methods Of Life.
And, Thus Struggling To Win Each Strife!!
11 comments:
mam u rock!!
hpe u bcum a poet......
G8 composition , itz realy wry touchy itz truely emotional i had tearz on mah eyez reading dis 1 whose heart is mournful can only write such a poem gud job keep it up hope one day ur mournful heart wil b happy again
hey mishu
we r really proud of u & i m dam sure tu badi hoke ek poet banegi
itz brilliant buddy
Hi Pratiksha ..
U have done a Good Job....Ohh it's not ur job bu Emotions Which Make you to write this Poem and make yourself feel Good ...
Person in deep Mourn can only write this type of Poem , And i Personally know u that this happen with u in reality ...
And to be a Friends , i Wish u will again happy with new Friends ....
But remember ...People Don't make Same Mistake again .!!
hey miss variety..!!
i neva expected such talent frm u..!!!
aftr all dost kiski hai..!!
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
prasing it meaning giving a defination to someone imagination
which i cant do but its over defination
wooooooooooooooow
keep it up
u Rock
gr8 analtic and logical presence
u hav a vibrant talent n shud work on it n u will touch d summit 4 sure.
expressing feeling and emotions in melodies is rare quality which you have evolved .
nice blog.. with a story of itz own... u have a talent ..with artistic touchh.. so keep it up.. gud luck and all the best for ur future...
a great poetry
its too touhing
i was almost in my world of imagination by reading ur poem.
keep the gud work on.
u are very nice in writting poetry.
its too good.
why dont u write a poetry book of urs.
i will buy ur poetry books.
jaldi se publish karwao.
well...there r many comments here bt ya i know its depth... tumne acchha likha hai wildy .. wakai acchha... cheer up dear.. btw the work iz awesome
i had not imagined that these are all your creations so i was prepared to write somthin teasing you ---you need a gr8 round of applause hats off yaar ----lage raho yaar
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